While reading my essay I underlined the transitions, circled the key terms, and put boxes around the pointing terms. I noticed that a majority of my essay was circled with the words science and art as the essay revolves around these two terms and how they should be integrated into the laboratory, classrooms, and society. The word integrated, technology, human, creative, balance, and equilibrium were also circled a lot. These key terms were the things that I relied on the most when trying to get my main argument across. The transition words that were underlined were useful to make my points clear and flow from one to the other. Although, I did notice that I could use more transitions as I did not have quite as many as I expected. There are quite a few boxes around terms such as “it, who, he, his, itself” which can be replaced with could be replaced with terms that are more direct and clear.